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Desperate For Feedback - Steve "KingSlayer" Davids - 01-30-2014
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=10065
Hi all, would love some feedback on this...
It was something a bit different, I mean it's a shoot I always do but I tried to make it a character development shoot rather than a trash talk shoot.
Yeah, all that jazz.
let me know what you think!
Desperate For Feedback - John Austin - 01-30-2014
I ended up reading this yesterday and my only gripe is that it wasn't longer
...when it stopped when it did I was like noooooo!!! haha, seriously though I thought it was awesome...always a fan of Steve Davids even if he does kick my ass 
Desperate For Feedback - Archie Lawson - 01-30-2014
Thanks man! I enjoyed writing it, I didn't want it to be too long because it's a sequel to two roleplays I haven't written yet
Cheers though, I love a good compliment haha