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Luke Gunnar Relentless Feedback - Luke Gunnar - 08-23-2014
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=14384
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=14533
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=14586
This is how my character has been developing thus far. Do any of you guys see room for improvement? Would love to hear.
Luke Gunnar Relentless Feedback - LH Harrison - 08-25-2014
Hey man just quickly went through your stuff, and I really enjoyed it. I thought your work was fluid, albeit perhaps a bit short. But I think it kind of works for your character. I'll be interested to see where you go from here.
Luke Gunnar Relentless Feedback - Luke Gunnar - 08-25-2014
Thank you man I really appreciate it. I do feel some of the roleplays could have a bit more meat to them, I just didn't want to bog it down with excess filler about what the character did that day/night or what have you.