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Feedback on this "Storyline" ? - "The Phantom" Jack Kronus - 09-03-2013
Can I have some feed back on these two pieces? I usually write individual pieces, like, with any relation to each other. However, I'm kind of thinking about starting some kind of storyline. I want some honest feedback on these two. I really need to know what you guys think.
First one - http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=6051
Second one - http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=6237