Alright everyone, now that we're coming off a huge PPV I think now would be a great time to try something new, for the next week or two I will be offering feedback to anyone who would like it. All you need to do? Throw me a PM, linking your RP and what you specifically want me to look at, I will be doing a general overview where I grade your scene description, character development, shoot and all of that good stuff, and give a suggestion or two on what you can improve on. I am not at all one of the best around here but a reliable feedback service should be able to help improve the overall writing and confidence of the people here in the XWF.

The service will be available from right... NOW! Just hit me up with a PM at any time, or even on the thread if you like, I'll attempt to get back to you within a day at the most.

There isn't a particular RP I want you to look at, I was just wondering if theres anything in general I should look to improve on (assuming you've read the majority of my work so far)?

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XWF Career accomplishments/Highlights:

One Time XWF Universal Champion
Two Time X-Treme Champion
One Time Intercontinental Champion
One Time World Tag Team Champion
XWF All Time Top 50 inductee
One Time 24/7 Briefcase Holder
Intercontinental Royal Rumble Winner
Captained the winning team "Team Dominance" at War Games '15
Lethal Lottery IV Finalist
July 2015 Superstar Of The Month
March 2017 Superstar Of The Month
October 2016 Promo Of The Month "Changes"

I'll look at all the stuff you put up for the PPV and give you something to work with in a bit.