I am not sure how old you are but I know that it might be tough sometimes to write as a twelve-year-old especially as a 12 year old girl. I think your trash talk has to be on par with the intelligence level of a 12 year old which is always tough to do because you want to use big vocab and complex disses and stuff sometimes but that wouldn't make sense in terms of the age of your character and the realism of the RP itself.

Overall dude I think you are pretty solid I mean when I faced you as Muddy Waters I was almost positive I was going to lose.

Really enjoy reading your stuff. I hear you though sometimes I'm My Own biggest critic as well and sometimes I feel like my character get stale and monotonous because it's the same thing every week but then I remember that my character is an asshole and it all works out LOL