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Cheat's Sad Day feedback
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Ambrose Helios Offline
Forever Trapped.


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Some men, some teens, few women
(the villain you love to hate; has cult following)
 (Where is my roster page?)
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02-23-2014, 07:27 AM

Your dialogue is top notch buddy, the only thing I would maybe say could do with a little work is a bit more description but that's just me personally. Love the character.
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Cheat's Sad Day feedback - by Clean Lucena - 02-23-2014, 07:13 AM
Cheat's Sad Day feedback - by Ambrose Helios - 02-23-2014, 07:27 AM
Cheat's Sad Day feedback - by Clean Lucena - 02-23-2014, 07:56 AM



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