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Vincent Lane Offline
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09-16-2014, 08:14 PM

I agree with Frodo. Definitely some of your best that I've seen.

If I had to give any sort of advice (without scrolling back to your feedback thread, because lazy) I'd say that it seems like the hardest time you have is combining the "in ring" Cain with the "out of ring" Cain. The stories you put together are really, really cool, but then it seems like you kinda remember you have a wrestling match and start tossing trash talk.

It's like when I watch True Blood (shut up, I like it) and there's the 3,000 year old Eric telling people to fuck off. It doesn't make sense to me, like he should act and speak differently. But that's really tough.

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Messages In This Thread
Well... - by Cain - 09-16-2014, 06:07 PM
Well... - by Vincent Lane - 09-16-2014, 06:32 PM
Well... - by Gator - 09-16-2014, 07:00 PM
Well... - by Vincent Lane - 09-16-2014, 08:14 PM
RE: Well... - by Ozymandias - 09-17-2014, 03:02 AM
Well... - by Paul Heyman - 09-17-2014, 06:28 AM
RE: Well... - by Mastermind - 09-17-2014, 07:03 AM
Well... - by Great Buzzard Eli James IV - 09-17-2014, 08:55 AM
RE: Well... - by Cain - 09-17-2014, 08:59 AM



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