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Sorry to ask so soon.
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Paolo Mancini Offline
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#1
05-19-2014, 03:27 PM

But I was wonder if my latest RP is better than the one I posted last week.
Here the link to the second one case it gets pushed the down the board.
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=12347
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Vellore Brommer Offline
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#2
05-19-2014, 03:39 PM

I liked this new rp alot the whole ninja vs mafia thing you got going is pretty cool!
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Ozymandias Offline
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#3
05-19-2014, 03:43 PM

I think it was an improvement.

You could stand to do some formatting stuff to spice it up a little bit, add some color to the different people speaking. Also add some spaces so that it's a bit easier to read.

All in all the story is good. I've enjoyed it.
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Paolo Mancini Offline
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Some men, some teens, few women
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Posts: 23
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#4
05-19-2014, 03:44 PM

Thanks you guys
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