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#1
10-02-2014, 05:56 PM

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=15804

What did you guys think? Pros, cons all that. Smile

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#2
10-02-2014, 06:05 PM

I liked it.

One con, coming from your opponent, is, how does Ghost Tank know he's being talked about? How do we see what's happening with Game Boy?

It's nitpicky, I know. Again, I did like it. Especially his reaction to Ghost Tank's name.

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#3
10-02-2014, 06:08 PM

lol I get it, well just imagine my RP was filmed. And just give your reply to it. I understand how it can be hard to respond to a video game character but you can put it down to camera trickery and CGI and stuff. I liked your RP too, hopefully we can have a lot of fun this week Smile

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#4
10-02-2014, 06:09 PM

It's pretty good, it's easily explained how we see it. It's always being filmed. I don't always discuss their being a camera following me, but we all kind of know it. You seem very naive and trusting, which I think could play well.
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#5
10-02-2014, 06:17 PM

Thanks man.

Yeah Game Boy is the generic good guy so he is very trusting and only wants to help. It could play well into someone trying to help but leading him down the wrong path, it'll make a good story too.

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#6
10-02-2014, 06:20 PM

Hold is the Princess supposed to be, anyway?
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#7
10-02-2014, 06:21 PM

How old? Around 19, Game Boy is meant to be 17.

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#8
10-02-2014, 06:23 PM

Too old, we're not gonna do that collab idea I had.




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