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01-30-2014, 05:19 AM

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=10065

Hi all, would love some feedback on this...

It was something a bit different, I mean it's a shoot I always do but I tried to make it a character development shoot rather than a trash talk shoot.

Yeah, all that jazz.

let me know what you think!
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01-30-2014, 05:23 AM

I ended up reading this yesterday and my only gripe is that it wasn't longer Big Grin ...when it stopped when it did I was like noooooo!!! haha, seriously though I thought it was awesome...always a fan of Steve Davids even if he does kick my ass Tongue
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01-30-2014, 05:47 AM

Thanks man! I enjoyed writing it, I didn't want it to be too long because it's a sequel to two roleplays I haven't written yet Tongue Cheers though, I love a good compliment haha
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